Out of the suddent a soldier, accompanied by another soldier, shouted at him and told him to stop.
They approached him and mocked his bicycle calling it names. Then, they took interest at it's speed and decided to take it from him.
When Abuji came, the soldiers tell him they wanted the bicycle and Abuji allowed them to to have it.
After the soldiers left, Tae-yul cried and Abuji comforts him by hugging and promising a better and nicer bicycle in the future.
You have to tell me what is the purpose of this sketching. What do you want to illustrate here? Indicate if it's part of research etc.
ReplyDeleteNice sketches and simple storyline! Now think about stretching the story abit further to include the character(s) thoughts and/ or feelings. You may want to focus on the protagonist. Perhaps also have sketches that zoom into the facial expression of your character. Five pages are too little.
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